Editing Demos! Whooooaaaaaa

So I partnered up with Mark, and we were assigned this editing concept, see? And you see, well, see here, that see, well we hadda, well, make a video see? A video for two a' these concepts, see? And these concepts, these concepts were some fancy shmancy things see? Point of view, see? And..and the 180 degree rule see? And we, we combined them see? No? You don't see? Well, here. Now you can see it.



1. Concept/Script:
- How well does your story demonstrate your concept?

Although It demonstrates it well, it could be better, and the story is too short to actually display an acceptable amount of my concepts(for example each concept is only demonstrated once).

- What problems did you have and what might you have done better?

That would be the story-line and plot. The fight could have been prolonged, more point of view shots could have been established,  and the plot itself is way too short and does not display any point whatsoever.

2. Camera Work-
- How well did you shot your actors in their scenes?

I think the shots were fine, but problems like lighting and some camera placement could have been fixed to make it so much better.

- Describe your most creative shot.

I suppose the most creative shot would be the two shot...But that's not really creative now, is it?

3. Edit-
- What challenges did you have in the edit?

The video was too short to actually be long enough for me to do my voice-over, for one thing! It was way less than a minute, and the shots were way too short! That's when I got creative--How about pausing and rewinding? What about just prolonging the shots to make enough room for the audio? So I did. I made enough room, and added in some fonts and texts.

- What did you have to do to demonstrate your concept in the edit?

Well, I had to think outside of the box to make the project even remotely gradable. I took the very few shots and used editing tricks like reverse, sound effects, and I utilized the texts. I just used what I had and made it work. That's it.